It does sound somewhat rushed :P
The whole song overall sounded pretty cool, but it sounds maybe a bit too cheesy. The ending could use a bit more thought into it, but then again you wanted to submit SOMETHING for round 2 ;) Sorry, I do not know much about this genre so I can not really explain myself very well here.
5/5 , 8/10. keep it up, I liked it.
Check out my submission for round 2 :)
Haha, well, thanks for the review ;p
I checked out your song and i think you're gonna win this round. I still hope for a little miracle though :p
Good luck to you!
I am not really a DnB artist myself but I have heard better tracks than this so I know some what on what I'm talking about.
Not a lot of people are using the Amen break loop any more because it is getting old, and plus it sounds a little bit noobish. For one, there was absolutely no bass. I was a bit disappointed because I was hoping for some epic heavy saw bass, but it never came.
The melody/chord progression got quite boring. It sounded as if you did not put really any effort into it and just sort of slapped it in there if you know what I mean.
The song is okay itself, but it could use a lot more work. I liked it, and whether you don't celebrate Christmas it did sound like a Christmas song :P
Christmas IS a Pegan Holiday. Christians just took it and made it their own holiday ( using Jesus as an excuse ) because they did not want to be like the Pegans.
Sorry to dissepoint you. But i never wanted to use a heavy bass. That would make the song sound to rough and wouldnt match with the animation.
As for the AmenBreak topic is more of a taste matter then it being noobish :P . i sliced the amenbreak pretty good. And gave it a breakbeat sound to it.
As for the Chord progression was done on purpose. I wasnt going for anything really big. I just love making simple songs. I really really really did my best to make a decent chord progression.
But thanks for taking your time to review my song. Im very thankfull for that. :)
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